I wish I were a cellphone,
So I could hear you vioce every day.
I wish I were a sprak of firework,
So for one moment, you would stop and look at me.
I wish I were a diary,
So I could know how your truly felt.
I wish I were a teddy bear,
So I could sleep with you eveyday.
I wash I were a candle,
So durning my life times, I could make you life a little lighter.
I wish I were a mirror
So though my reflection of you, you would know how beauteful you are.
I wish I wre an umbrella,
So I could shelter you from all the way.
I wish I were a handkerchief,
So I could be there to catch your tears.
I wish I were a camera,
So I could capture all the beautiful moments for you.
I wish you were me,
So you could know how much I love you!

I like it!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI really like this poem! The points made in this poem made me smile. However, there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes you should change. Otherwise, good job! (:
ReplyDeleteThis poem is so sweet!!! I really like your analogies to how simple objects in life can portray love.
ReplyDeleteNicely done :)
-Suzanne L
Good effort, nice use of metaphors and similies to demonstrate your points and convey your message.
ReplyDeleteA very sweet and interesting poem
ReplyDeletegood use of repetitive structures for effect. Continue to keep on top of editing mechanical and grammatical aspects in your writing to make us better comprehend your ideas
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